Well after practicing my pieces for a long period of time, I took a break by writing a little piece. I had a little melody in my head, and sooner or later, I had the first section of my composition! It's a recording of Finale 2005 playing it on my computer, so the recording is quite harsh. I can't really finish the piece or record the whole thing until my piano competition is over (this coming Sunday). So, I would just like some feedback on how I can improve my composition!

http://www.savefile.com/files/9792714

And sorry that it lacks any true compositional techniques. I'm still in high school, so I still have time to learn!